Hi viewers, Today I did a recount about yesterday it took some time but I did it. The story is right down below if you want to see it but that is it for today, blog you later!
Credit for the background: https://www.shutterstock.com/video/clip-1015027474-stars-starry-night-sky-twinkling-lights
Kia ora Yahya,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to hear what you have been up to during Lockdown. I like how you were descriptive and used words like cold, rainy and windy. Let's look into adding more detail - what did you watch on Disney Plus? Anything you would like to recommend your viewers?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa
Hi Yahya
ReplyDeleteThat was an interesting recount! I too, liked your adjectives in the beginning of your recount. It really did describe the day..
What did you have your lunch? What did you do after that?
Can’t wait to see your next blog!
Interesting to see what you've been up to during this lockdown period !!
ReplyDeleteFROM MRS A @ NEW WINDSOR SCHOOL
ReplyDeleteKia ora Yahya
Well done for including an acknowledgement for the chosen background to your writing. I notice that you have used the sentence starters: Yesterday, After, Then and When. I wonder what other ones you could also use. Which Disney movie did you watch and did you like it?
I look forward to reading your next blog.
From Mrs A